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短文改错
     假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
      2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Ⅰ.
Today is Sunday. I’ve been in Canada for two months. This is first time that I have been away from my family for such a long time. With the help of Katia a roommate of me, I’ve soon got used to live without my parents around. Katia, like many other Russian girls, are nice and lively. We became friends shortly after we meet each other. Although her English is a little hardly to understand, we enjoy chat and we usually talk a lot about our own families. We’re both surprised that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different. Now, we’re planning a small party for the next Sunday. There, Katia will introduce me to some of her friends, one of who has been to China several times. I just can’t wait.
【答案】
Today is Sunday. I’ve been in Canada for two months. This is ∧ first time that I have been 
                                                  the
away from my family for such a long time. With the help of Katia a roommate of me, I’ve soon 
                                                                 mine                 
got used to live without my parents around. Katia, like many other Russian girls, are nice and 
living                                                     is
lively. We became friends shortly after we meet each other. Although her English is a little hardly  
met                               hard    
To understand, we enjoy chat and we usually talk a lot about our own families. We’re both 
chatting

surprised that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different. Now, we’re planning a small  
                        and
party for the next Sunday. There, Katia will introduce me to some of her friends, one of who has 
删除the                                                        whom
been to China several times. I just can’t wait.


Ⅱ.
It’s not easy for us to accept the fact which we are going to leave our beloved school. However, we are looked forward to our future life. Last night, my friends and I walk around our school talking about the funny things that had been happened in the past three years. Suddenly, I got an idea. I said to him we should make a deal that we could get together here four years late. My friends were so exciting about it, and they agreed with me. I started to think about what I would become in the future. I may becoming a teacher, or a doctor. I think deal will help us keep in touch to each other.
【答案】
 

Ⅲ.
It was on a warm autumn day that my father and I walk into my new high school. After registered in the classroom, I was taken to my dormitory by the volunteer. Altogether I had five roommates, two of which arrived later. I got to know my new roommate immediately. Although I was quite unwilling to say “Goodbye” to my father, but he had to leave to home. I suddenly realized I had grown up and that I had to look after me and live independently. Not until then I know my senior high school life had real begun.
【答案】
1. Walk改成walked
2. registered改成registering
3. the改成a
4. which改成whom
5. roommate改成roommates
6.去掉but
7. to改成for
8. me改成myself
9. then(∧did ) I
10. real改成really

Ⅳ.

    Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student at a ordinary
school. Although I felt disappointed at the shabby campus and my poorly-equipped classroom,
but I found the teachers impatient and considerate. Beside, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in
class. I decided to make the best it. I worked hard and got along good with my teachers and
classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they are always available. Soon, I became one of the top
student in my class, that greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated. My experience
tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who we are.
【答案】
1. a→an   
2. 去掉but    
3. patiently→patient    
4. Beside→Besides   
5. best后面加of    
6. good→well    
7. are→were    
8. student→students     
9. that→which    
10. we→you
Ⅴ.
Dear Alice,
    I am delighted to hear that you will come to my city for sightseeing. I was writing to  you expressing my willingness to make arrangement for your tour.
    As for the accommodation, I have the option of either staying in my home or in a hotel, that I can reserve for you in advance if you like. However, Id like to help you work a travel schedule. In the way, could you do me a favor and purchase a Coach purse though it doesnt bother you? With my mothers birthday approached, I wish to present it to her as a birthday gift.
    Im looking forward to meeting you soon. I hope you will have a fun here.
                                                       Yours sincerely,
                                                        Li Hua
【答案】
1. was→ am
2. arrangement→ arrangements
3. I→ you
4. that→ which
5. However→ Besides
6. work后加out
7. In→ By
8. though→ if
9. approached→ approaching
10. 去掉have后的a


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